掃碼谘詢2026年新航（háng）道（dào）寒假班

January 4, 2026

雅（yǎ）思（sī）小作文係列（liè） | 欄目（mù）送說明

分享雅思考試小作文真題範文。每一篇範文都（dōu）經由業團隊反複校對，終外教審查定稿。成功就是（shì）日複一日（rì）那一點點小小（xiǎo）努力的積累。

This table below shows percentages of satisfaction that First-Year students rated their modules in five aspects in 2014.

主體段分段方法：

主體1：Pre-Course info、Teaching、Tutor

主體2：Resource(print)、Resource(other)

開頭（tóu）段

The table illustrates the proportions of first-year students who were satisfied with three subjects (Economics, Law and Commerce) across five aspects in 2014.

概述段

Overall, Commerceachieved the highest satisfaction levelsacross all five categories.Whilestudents in Economics and Commercewere most satisfied withteaching quality, Lawlagged behindin this area.

思路要點：

- Commerce三個方麵（miàn）的好評率高

- Economics、Commerce在teaching的好評率高，但Law在teaching的好評率（lǜ）低

Body paragraph 1

It is clear thatthe three modulesdiffered significantly regardingteaching-related criteria. Commerceperformed exceptionally well, with 95% of students expressing satisfaction with pre-course information,compared withjust 59% for Economics.Likewise, 95% of the surveyed students were satisfied with teaching quality in Economics and Commerce, while Lawrecorded the lowest figureat just 62%.A similar pattern was observedfor tutoring sessions, where Commerce and Economicsscored above90%,compared with a noticeably lower figure forLaw (76%).

思路要點：Pre-Course info、Teaching、Tutor

- 這三個方麵，三個（gè）學科的滿（mǎn）意度比例差距較大

- Pre-Course info：Commerce滿意度高(95%)，但（dàn）Economics僅為59%

- Teaching：Economics、Commerce都為95%，Law仍然（rán）排後一位(62%)

- Tutor：Commerce、economics滿意（yì）度都超過了90%，但law數據較低（dī）(72%)

Body paragraph 2

However,satisfaction with resources showed less significant variations, as the difference among the three subjects was under 20%. Commerce stilltook the lead, with over 80% giving positive feedback to both printed and other materials. Paper materials for economics were favored by 81% of the students,roughly 20% higher thanthe rate for other resources.Conversely, 70% of students expressed satisfaction with printed resources provided by the Department of Law, which wasslightly lower thanthe 80% recorded for other resources.

思路（lù）要點：Resource(print)、Resource(other)

- 這兩個方麵，三個學科滿（mǎn）意度差異不大，在20%以內

- Commerce：滿意度仍（réng）舊高，兩個resource的滿意度都超過80%

- Economics：resource(print)滿意度為81%，鐵皮保溫施工比resource(other)高了約（yuē）20%

- Law：resource(print)滿意度為70%，但resource(other)滿（mǎn）意度為80%

雅思小作文上分Tips

小作文看著簡單，但寫起來卻常常遇到這些問題：概（gài）括句總覺得空、不知道寫哪組對比；模仿（fǎng）範文也（yě）寫了不少，但分數（shù）始終卡在6……

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